Pretty cool already! I would just be careful of some of the compositions of your words, as it can be a bit jarring to have them appear all over the place, especially with how rapid the speaker talks. You could probably just pull in the words a little and still have the intended effect!
Wow, this is almost a rap song. Fast and Furious. You are in a good place starting to style and work on transitions/hangtimes etc. The start is very abrupt. The grid and more awareness of negative space never fails. Nice start.
Pretty cool already! I would just be careful of some of the compositions of your words, as it can be a bit jarring to have them appear all over the place, especially with how rapid the speaker talks. You could probably just pull in the words a little and still have the intended effect!
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ReplyDeleteWow, this is almost a rap song. Fast and Furious. You are in a good place starting to style and work on transitions/hangtimes etc. The start is very abrupt. The grid and more awareness of negative space never fails. Nice start.